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Somewhat uncomfortable but the humor seems to allude to Chris-Chan's Sonic artwork -- for that, I found this quite amusing. I also enjoyed the parody poking fun at the new Sonic games near the end. I thought it was spot-on overall.

It's difficult to tell who the monsters really are. The exhibitions appear to be somewhat human yet they are far too deformed. This flash has a polarizing effect that is thought-provoking and visually amazing while being equally disturbing at the same time. I really enjoyed this!

Who's cutting onions in here!? D:

I don't even know what that was but it almost killed me. I... I can't breathe... I think I'm crying. Haven't had a good laugh in awhile.

The Experiment was a little dry for my taste but I burst out laughing at Exchango Sizo. That was simply hilarious. No dialogue required.

MiddleFingerRings responds:

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Crap.

And my movie's rating is higher than all three of yours combined. You mad?

Eh...

The mannerisms were there as expected. At least you did a great job depicting all the obnoxious hype thrown into the game. Didn't make me laugh but I smirked a bit. I'd like to see you discover more boundaries in humor though. It unfortunately only covers the Dane Cook demographic with funny sounds accompanied by overblown animation makes the audience laugh. But that's just a single thread in the rope of comedy.

So I thought a 7 would suffice since I still enjoy your work. It did not surprise me but I thought it was still adequate.

Eh...

I'd work on the content and the length. I'm not exactly sure what kind of comedic material (if any) you were attempting to deliver with this flash. Very VERY dry humor that left me confused.

I enjoyed it.

Even though I think the sprite proportioning could use some work, at least you got the content of your flash down; it was successful. I thought the story was entertaining and it did make me chuckle.

The "dude you guys still play pokemon?" part was great.

Maybe you finally get it?

I would strongly suggest learning Adobe flash. Clearly, NONE of your videos made it past a 2-rating. If you get it, you would either learn flash and make something decent or leave these videos on YouTube.

-This needs playback control for one. An infinite loop gets really annoying.
-It needs to be animated. I cannot stress that enough.
-A well-written story would be nice.
-Try actually watching the flash movies here to get a better idea of what audience you will be presenting to.

Keep in mind Newgrounds is NOT YouTube. In your case, it's like entering a foreign country. There are different standards here and ignoring them will end horribly; look at the ratings on the left and you'll know.

Take this however you like. I'll just assume you get it.

I'm your huckleberry.

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